wanting to take off
we head for Lagos
which was not far off
to find the logos
and fix a locus
we were not bogus
we just had focus
which made them hate us
without a just cause
they tried to curse us
but curse will not curse
without a just curse
right now they discuss
wanting to use force
this really disgusts
they claim to know God
how can they this claim
when they just disdained
the lord will burst them
and later rust them
cos we cant trust them
we will not mob them
or even judge them
so age can mop them
they want to jump us
and even hump us
so men will dump us
they even bugged us
in st petersburgh
till God debugged us
and Reebok us
inside Edinburgh
right now they grumble
because they sorrow
while we get double
for all our trouble
Nice try...almost like rap lyrics.
ReplyDeleteI suggest you work on the flow and pattern of your rhymes. Determine if you want the rhyme to be at the very end of a line or in the body, also make the lines a bit longer so it looks less cluttered.
Keep it up bro!
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